I have decided to change the plot because of limitations within filming schedule and actors etc, and I will have to use myself within the film which is not what I first intended. However, I was not completely satisfied with my plot anyway, and my audience research proved that they preffered psychological thrillers, which is not what my original plot was. So therefore my new plot is a psychological thriller that will fit better with my plan of filming.
Plot:
After the mysterious death of Vincent's best friend, Nathan, hiss mental health decreases as he mourns. Strange things start to happen around him, he sees shadows, hears voices whispering his name, and a strange Man dressed in black is appearing everywhere he goes, always facing with his back towards Vincent. He believes that this man is following him as he was the killer of Nathan, and for some reason, he wants to kill Vincent aswell.
This type of occurance repeats continuously, he complains to his parents and to his friends but no one believes him. After seeing the man at a shopping center, he points him out to his parents, but they cannot see him. That night, he awakes to see the man standing at his window, he gets up and walks towards him. He puts his hand on the man's shoulder and turns him around. The man has no facial features apart from a mouth. No eyes. No nose. Nothing. The man and Vincent talk, he keeps asking him asking the man why he killed Nathan, but he never replies with an answer, he just keeps repeating that he isn't real, and is only a figment of Vincent's imagination.
In the morning, Vincent tells his parents about the previous night. They become worried, and they send him to a therapist to understand what is wrong. During a course of hypnosis, the therapist uncovers that it was in fact Vincent who murdered Nathan, and that his mind created the man to block out any memories of it. He describes how he and Nathan had been in a big fight which climaxed in Nathan hitting Vincent with a spade, and in a deep uncontrollable anger within his mind, Vincent had gone to Nathan's house and killed him later that night.
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