ORIGINAL Plot:

After a man dies mysteriously in his home (The man in the introduction), his family are stalked by a strange man with empty eyes. Since being seen looking out of the window of the church at the funeral of the Father, the man is seen wherever the family go. The young boy is watched by the man at his school, pretending to be a cleaner, The Mother is bumped into on the street by him and their teenage daughter is followed by him in a car (there are a few other experiences too). Eventually he enters their dreams, appearing before them. The family all find out that each one of them has experienced seeing this man in their dreams and they call for help from a Detective to find out just who this man is. The detective gathers evidence and watches security camera footage. He follows the mans actions on the footage and finds out where he lives. This leads him to his house where he finds photos and pictures of a new born baby and him with the 'Mother'. The detective finds that the daughter was this mans child but the mother had run away with the father from the beginning who was murdered. He has been stalking them because he is obsessed with HIS family, but he is very angry and wants revenge. The detective notices the extreme trouble the family are in, so he rushes to them to try and get them to safety. When he enters the house, he finds the Mother dead on the kitchen floor. A high octane, suspenseful and tension filled scene takes place where the detective hides the children and tries to keep safe from the murderer.

In the end the detective is killed, but the children escape to a neighbours home. The murderer dissapears.

(I later decided not to use this plot as it seems very Cliche, and a lot like other thrillers made nowadays)